Awww man, you're killing me!
(I write as I listen)
Nice intro. I like the beat and fell of it right off the bat.
And a very nice build! The only problem is that it didn't build up to anything. It had all of this building up of sound and drum that leads to a solo. I didn't particularly like that, but it did flow through well enough to keep my attention and enjoyment.
Man! There's two parts where you build up to nothing. I really just wanted a part to jump up and dance to, but it never really hit. I mean, I guess near 1:30 it picks up, but for some reason isn't as loud as the drums had made it seem like it would be.
I enjoyed it however. Great work.